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Mr. M
4/27/2015 03:29:20 am
This is better but I do have one more suggestion. In the library where Sophie sees Nancy get picked on for the first time, I think you need to show her trying to decide whether to help Nancy or not. I think if you show that she initially wants to help but then is maybe scared, the video can also be about having the courage to stand up for someone in need. Later she does have that courage to help. As it is, it looks like she's just not helping and that doesn't make her look too good. If you can show that she maybe tries to get up, but is nervous and sits down, maybe because the bully stared at her when she got up, that would look like she at least noticed and was attempting to help. Does that make sense? Leave a Reply. |
About The ProjectIn the 4th Quarter at CKTV, we get to choose any type of video to produce. This quarter, I chose to work with Angeline as my partner on a music video for the song, "Play On", by Carrie Underwood. Visit this page for any work related to the project. Archives
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