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Mr. M
6/5/2015 04:28:04 am
Nice job overall. Looks like you went and corrected some of the things that I pointed out in earlier drafts. I just noticed a continuity issue....her backpack is huge and heavy when she puts it on in the library. But when she comes home, it's much lighter and less filled. Aha! Busted! Haha! I know it's too late but if I could change one more thing, it would be how it ends. Instead of her being pushed down one more time, I'd have her new friend step up and prevent the girls from doing that again. Shots were solid, angles were good. Story was told well. This is getting a 3.8 or an A. Congrats! Leave a Reply. |
About The ProjectIn the 4th Quarter at CKTV, we get to choose any type of video to produce. This quarter, I chose to work with Angeline as my partner on a music video for the song, "Play On", by Carrie Underwood. Visit this page for any work related to the project. Archives
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