Mr. M
1/9/2016 11:07:47 am
Nice job on the script, tightening this up. You tell a complete story here, from why foster parents are needed, to how to become one, and by showing us a great example of a family that is doing just that. I was just wondering now as I read this again....should you have put something in there about how a potential family who is interested can get in touch with the proper people? Maybe when we post this to our Vimeo page, we can add that info in there. One thing I'd like you to work on for next time is your VOs. When you state something in your VO, like this: "VO: Children can be entered into the foster care system from an early age, and can stay in the system until they ‘age out’ at 18. They are put into foster care when the environment they are staying in is no longer safe or when their essential needs are not met," and then you follow it up with a sound bite that says the exact same thing: "MONICA:
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