Lurline McGregor
12/3/2014 02:19:53 am
For Hiki No sign off at the end, it should read exactly this way: "This is Alaysia Navor from Chiefess Kamakahelei Middle School, for HIKI NO.
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Lurline McGregor
12/3/2014 02:29:12 am
In the narration, delete "Itʻs really a win-win situation here at Lanakila Kitchen". The second sentence says the same thing (delete "too" at the end of the second sentence. The first sentence is too editorial, be careful of that as a reporter throughout your narration.
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AuthorHi! My name is Alaysia Navor and this is my Quarter 2 Project page. Here you will see all paperwork, the final product, and progress on my partner, Herenui and my project. About the ProjectOur Project is about Lanakila Kitchen, a social enterprise of Lanakila Pacific. This kitchen is a great opportunity for adults with cognitive, physical, social, or age related challenges or disabilities on Kauai.
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