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Lanakila Kitchen CKTV Final Project

12/16/2014

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Kolten Gusman
12/17/2014 10:33:42 pm

Hello Alaysia,
That was a great final video, and congratulations on getting Hiki Nō. I didn't know anything about Lanakila Kitchen until I watched your video. That seems to me like a very good program with very generous and kind employees. Good job not going over three minutes, and your B-Roll was good and so were the three interviews that you used. I can't grade you though but keep it up!

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Mr. M
1/19/2015 12:35:15 pm

Audio - excellent audio all the way around. All but one of your interviews and voice overs had audio at clear and appropriate levels throughout. I wish there were more nat sounds in your b-roll though. I don't hear much. Were the levels lowered too much? Was your mic working when you shot b-roll? See if there are any nat sounds in your b-roll that you could let us hear more of. You do have one interview with the main character that does have a little hiss in it. Other than that, everything else was great. Overall a A- effort for audio.

Visuals - visuals are much better in this newer version. Your b-roll is better and you're using some sequences which are great. You do have a b-roll at 2:11 that isn't so good though. You show us the back of the trainer helping someone. No face and can't see what they are doing. Do you have a better shot from a different angle instead? For Kana'e's first interview, can you extend what she has to say just a little? There seems to be more she's saying and you cut her off after she just says how she started 4 years ago as a trainee. I'd have to look at your transcripts to see if there is more to her answer that might help. Maybe, maybe not. B-roll was solid with no movement or shaking in them. Nicely focused too. Visuals are an A.

Overall I'd grade this as a solid A. Very nice job overall and I can't wait to see this on Hiki No!

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    Hi! My name is Alaysia Navor and this is my Quarter 2 Project page. Here you will see all paperwork, the final product, and progress on my partner, Herenui and my project.

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    Our Project is about Lanakila Kitchen, a social enterprise of Lanakila Pacific. This kitchen is a great opportunity for adults with cognitive, physical, social, or age related challenges or disabilities on Kauai.

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  • About Me
    • CKTV Media Productions
  • Blog
  • Inside Scoop
  • Projects
    • Quarter 1: Quadriplegic Painter
    • Quarter 2: Need For Foster Families
    • Quarter 3: Tumbling Towers PSA
    • Quarter 4: Media For Dummies
  • Resources
  • Archive
    • 2014-2015 Projects >
      • Quarter 1: Colored Placards
      • Quarter 2: Lanakila Kitchen
      • Quarter 3: Anti-Smoking PSA
      • Quarter 4: Music Video
      • STN 2014-2015
    • Past Inside Scoops